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My Bloody Beating Heart

Gory, bloody and distasteful or something beautiful?

By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
My Bloody Beating Heart
Photo by Ksenia Yakovleva on Unsplash

If you took my beating heart out of my body,

Still connected, and working, but clearly visible

You would see, the signs would be tangible

The way I react to your mind, soul and body

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My heart beating faster, my blood pressure rising

You may call it gory, all bloody and distasteful

In its own special way, though, I say it's beautiful

My heart beating faster and constantly resizing

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Your intellect, wisdom and the fact that you care

The way you believe in me, push and support me

Your deep love of animals, art, crafts and the sea

Your curves, your smile and your soft blonde hair

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Although we've been through so many ups and downs

and though the bad days have been far too many to count

We're still together, facing problems as they surmount

And when you are near, my heartbeat still loudly sounds.

This was my response to a Vocal + Assist Facebook Group writing challenge.

The theme of the poem is Blood Pressure and use the word Beautiful and a word that rhymes with it in the poem.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!

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  • Sara Wilson3 years ago

    Incredible 😍

  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    Good job - good imagery!

  • Teresa Joiner3 years ago

    Excellent!!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    This was actually really beautiful. Wonderful take on the prompt!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    This is beautiful, Paul. Really great take on the prompt.

  • Wonderful and well written.

  • Nicely done Paul and a great take on the challenge.

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