Grow apart with me, my darling dear.
Part like petals of a blossom,
And the soft wings of a dove.
Our stories intertwined,
For all of this time,
Unravel here
And leave us,
Only
Love.
About the Creator
Mama Magdalene
Catharsis of a hypomanic-depressive psychonaut...
Evolution Through Empathy! <3
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme

Comments (18)
Making my rounds - Trying to learn different types of poetry. This is one I will have to try to learn. Nonet. It is a gorgeous poem.
Well done 🤩… vivid imagery.
Gorgeous poem! Congrats on placing!!
Congrats! Each line really built on the others in a stunning progression
Aww 🥹 In a sea of sad nonets… this has a welcomed lightness and sweetness. Well done!! 👌🙏🏻🌟❤️
I love your nonet - congratulations on your win!
Lovely piece. Congrats
Well done. Congratulations! 🍾🎈🎊
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Thank you for sharing this touching piece, it captures the complexities of relationships and the beauty of embracing change, love your works, subscribed.
Well-wrought! It is true that where people are absent, love can still remain, but it is not always pleasant. Nevertheless, "Better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all."
Gosh. How beautifully deep. What brilliant entry!
A softer resonance here. Excellent!
Oh, heavenly. What a beautiful landing.
Congrats on your top story.
Congrats on the Top Story! This is a beautiful poem!
Hey, your poem is wonderfully touching! 💗
Leave us only love. What a beautiful poem! Great entry to the Nonet Challenge.