Mum Here Is The Mail
Including a suspicious package wrapped in brown paper
I caught up with my oldest Son recently
And he excitedly told me his fantastic news,
He’d found and ordered the most perfect ring
So he can propose to the one he cannot refuse.
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He explained that he’d purchased it overseas
And requested that it be posted to my address,
He couldn’t afford to receive it at his place
As he was convinced his girl would guess.
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Wow there will, in the not too distant future
Be a cause for a major celebration,
These two have been together for nine years
And my son is ready for his love declaration.
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I’m not sure who is the more excited, he or I
As I have always wanted a daughter,
So this is a special addition to our family
And we are more than ready to welcome her.
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My Son explained how he intends to propose
He is going to plan the most romantic getaway,
Hopefully he can arrange this as quickly as possible
So he can organise this winter and there is no wait.
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He asked me not to tell my youngest Son
As he wanted to be the one to tell his brother,
He was happy to say I was the first to know
As I deserved that courtesy as his mother.
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He went on to ask, while drinking his coffee
If I would keep my eye out for the post,
Understandably he was concerned
That his precious mail would be poached.
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I was also extremely delighted to discover
That when the wedding did eventually occur,
They had discussed this at times together
And agreed an intimate affair was preferred.
Something small enough that at the reception
The wedding party and the invited guests,
Would all comfortably fit on a single table
To celebrate their union with all due respect.
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We finished up our coffee, ready to leave
As we prepared to go our separate ways,
I hugged him tight and told him I’m so proud
Of the most wonderful man he was today.
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From there the days meandered by as usual
No real time to give it any real thought,
My Son had warned the post would be awhile
Highlighting again, it was overseas he’d bought.
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However, the post arrived a lot faster than expected
When it turned up at my address one week later,
My youngest Son waltzed on in through my front door
Holding a suspicious package wrapped in brown paper.
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“Mum, here is the mail that was sitting in the mail box”
He declared as he handed me all the letters in his hand,
Then he held up the brown paper wrapped parcel
Wondering why it was here and trying to understand.
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Of course he was full of so many valid questions
Of why a parcel addressed to his older brother,
Had been delivered here to my home address
And there were secrets being held he discovered.
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I took the package and immediately went to hide it
As my oldest Son and his lady were due any minute,
They were coming over for coffee and a movie
And I didn’t want to spoil the surprise during their visit.
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I had to somehow get my youngest boy to understand
That he could not mention the package at any point,
However, my youngest Son is extremely intelligent
He’d caught on but decided to leave this point unvoiced.
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So that suspicious package wrapped in brown paper
Was of no concern and gave us no reason to fear,
In fact, it is the very opposite and will bring happiness
To our family, giving us another member to hold dear.
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Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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Another great poem! Hope they’re happy! 😀😍😄
Awww this was so sweet!