I love to bake
Especially Steak
I try to make a muffin man
That turn into a Zombie gingerbread man
Baking was a big mistake
( This is my first try at limerick)
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (14)
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Hahaha this is hilarious Mariann.
This was so much fun! Looking forward to more limericks from youuuu!
Ha ha. Baking, u got company there.
This is funny! ❤️
lol that was great ☺️
🤣🤣Nice one👍😉
Haha love the title
Oof! Poor muffin man… adorable😊
A zombie muffin, LOL, love it!
It was so funny and relatable, Great work :)
A zombie muffin, so funny
It's great to hear that you've written your first limerick, Mariann! I appreciate your effort in expressing your love for baking in a fun and creative way. Your limerick has a clear and structured rhyme scheme, which is a crucial element of this type of poem. However, the content of the poem is quite unique and unexpected, which makes it even more interesting. The idea of a muffin man turning into a zombie gingerbread man is both humorous and spooky, and it definitely grabs the reader's attention. I also appreciate your use of humor to express your frustration with baking. It's a relatable feeling for anyone who has had a kitchen mishap, and it makes the poem more engaging. Overall, I think you did a great job with your first limerick, Mariann! Your creativity and unique perspective are evident in your writing, and I hope you'll continue to explore your poetic talents. Keep writing and experimenting with different forms of poetry, and don't be afraid to take risks and try new things. Mariann, you can find an interesting take on the challenge at the following link: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-world-of-absurdity%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E. I encourage you to check it out and read through the poem. It's always helpful to see different interpretations and approaches to a challenge, and I think you'll enjoy reading this unique and creative piece. Thank you for sharing your work with us, and keep exploring the world of poetry!
Too cute! Poor muffin man. :(