Much Too Cold For You
Never will or would ever be again.
By Raphael FontenellePublished about a year ago • 1 min read
You wanted someone else to need you,
But I just couldn’t be that one
To need you the way you need
I was too cold to feel that
Too empty to feel
You were so warm
I was just
too cold for
you and
me
About the Creator
Raphael Fontenelle
Horror movie fan trying to write decent horror.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (7)
The realistic nature of your nonet hits your reader with a force. Well done.
I love the realisation from the MC here, that it's not the other person's fault, but it's still so sad! Excellently written!
Love that! Love how you tied everything into cold and heat!
Ugh sometimes you just can’t warm up and open up. Sometimes you just don’t feel safe enough or ready yet. And some people don’t want to wait. So complicated
Love this nonet
Oh ... my heart! That's so beautiful and sad all at once! Amazing job! 🩷
Wonderful nonet for the challenge😍