Motherhood means being Judged, but you must Focus on your Children
A sonnet
I don’t care about being a shiny star at this moment.
Despite all this chaos, my daughter will be a silky rose,
I don’t care if my in-laws tell me that I am a rodent.
I want my daughter to glow everyday as she grows.
Passive-aggressive comments, I turn the other way,
but don’t turn my daughter’s eyes into clouds that cry,
if my daughter feels the need to simply stay away,
then that is something that you respect and not deny.
Criticized for letting my daughter eat independently,
but they think it’s okay for her to eat gummy bears.
In-laws judging that my one year old walks unsteadily.
Instead of gummy bears, she can have teddy bears
My daughter’s dark brownie eyes shine while she’s with me.
My daughter floats delightfully, a beautiful rose is all that I see.
About the Creator
Diani Alvarenga
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Comments (6)
How beautiful. You have such a beautiful love for your daughter.
Parenting is the thing that gets you judged every which way <3
Diani Your devotion to your daughter is truly inspiring. She'll surely grow up to be a remarkable person.
Excellent work
Sometimes people can just be so weird, dumb and yet judgemental. I'm so glad you're strong to protect your daughter!
❤