Morning in the forest
A haiku poem for the creatures of the forest
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Morning starts so bright.
Forest creatures run and hide,
Happy out of sight!
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Haiku
What makes a well written haiku? A haiku should convey a moment of insight, probably from an observation either in the real world or in your mind and heart.
A haiku is written in three lines using a 5-7-5 syllable count.
There is a forest I can go for walks. This forest is a great inspiration for nature writing and haikus.
About the Creator
Susan Fourtané
Susan Fourtané is a Science and Technology Journalist, a professional writer with over 18 years experience writing for global media and industry publications. She's a member of the ABSW, WFSJ, Society of Authors, and London Press Club.
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Comments (11)
Beautiful 😍
Beautiful 😍
Nature walks are the best. Nice haiku, Susan, and I love the bunnies in your cover image!
Perfectly put. <3 Makes me feel like going for a walk to watch the sunrise <3
Peaceful and to the point. Love it!
Nice and peaceful morning read as I tip toe out of my dreams into a forest of furry creatures and smells of fresh dew on the trees. 🌹🌹🌹🌹
Ah, that's so blissful. Loved your Haiku!
A lot of of joy in a few words
Good mort
This is very peaceful ☺️
I like the gentle natural feel of this!