“More Than Meets the Eye”
Transformers
It looks like a building under moon’s smile,
but the people inside are much more.
It’s more of a hospital of sorts,
with sick, broken and scarred humans.
They worked toward raising money for building wells in Peru.
They helped feed many families around the world.
They visited those in the hospitals down the street.
They prayed for all of those in authority.
They weren’t perfect and didn’t pretend to be so,
they simply worked toward discipleship and watching other’s grow.
They just wanted to spread true cheer,
and deliver others from all fear.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Keep it up bro!
Wow, Jesse, this is such a heartfelt and inspiring piece! 🩵 The way you’ve painted this building as not just bricks and mortar but as a beacon of hope and healing is so touching. It beautifully captures the essence of genuine humanity and selfless love—absolutely uplifting! 🌙
Ah, love this one! A building that looks all chill under the moon, but inside? Boom—life-changing goodness happening! Wells in Peru, feeding families, visiting hospitals, spreading cheer—these folks are low-key heroes just doing their thing. Totally more than meets the eye!
Lovely. ♥️