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Moon-Milk-Eyes

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
(not my art) from Ponyo

deep down in a dark, gold dusk,

You told me that our link was born

In the star of lace

A Red, cool, deep beam

You hold me in your vast hand,

Like a hill, peak, warm and soft...

Milk Moon Eyes, is the way we feel

The rich, pure, kind of

Care,

So very soft

And like a

Wisp

Of sky....

I will see

no

One

But

You

Moon

Milk

Eyes

Like Kore I was lost,

You tore open the dead veil,

New life is here

Zest and zeal you gave me,

A soft spot I have for you.

I more than

Need you, my dear.

You are my Moon Milk Eyes Muse

And I care for you

In

The

Deep web

Of our lace star

We are one.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Test3 years ago

    Oooh I loved this one! The language and structure... gorgeous work! x

  • I'm guessing this has nothing to do with the Raven. May you be blessed, my friend, to know such love in your life.

  • Your poem was brimming with love! And I loved it so much!

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