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Moon Delight

For Vocal's Sky-Ku Challenge

By ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)Published about a year ago 1 min read
Moon Delight
Photo by Guzmán Barquín on Unsplash

Captured eyes fall up

To mesmerized skies afloat

Engorged October

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)

~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER

Admin. Vocal Social Society

Find me: ‪@andreapolla63.bsky.social‬

FB: https://www.facebook.com/susanandreasimmonspolla

ST: https://rock63.substack.com/

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What an outstanding opening line!! This is a great entry, ROCK!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    "Captured eyes fall up" oh, LOVE that 🥹 Beautiful!

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    All of these sky-ku are so amazing but I think this one might be my favorite. Well done!

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Gorgeous work!!

  • Uncledee'about a year ago

    Beautiful. Dear October see you in November

  • Gosh that was breathtaking! You nailed this challenge!

  • Lola Senseabout a year ago

    "Captured eyes fall up"--beautiful, interesting imagery 💜💜💜

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful haiku. Well done.

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