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Mona

An admirer’s plea

By Emma Kate GeePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
By Emma Kate Coleman (January 22, 2021)

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What perplexes you so?

Is it hail on your blue bells

trying in pebbles’ bed to grow?

Is it mud in your horse’s hoof

as he returns from the field?

Or dust on your shoe tops

from hay crops’ golden yield?

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What do you see beyond the veil?

Is it rainbow festival in cloud shroud

with turkey feast, dance and ale?

Is it burning, torturous fire

destroying sins at sun’s white core?

Or dream land with silver lake

and sweet bird song galore?

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What occupies your thoughts?

Is it squirrels making winter nests

in pines’ bending emerald lofts?

Is it lack of pence in itchy pocket

and supper you must forego?

Or that man you pass on market street

who at you winks and a kiss blows?

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What is it you want most?

Is it any gesture I can give you,

my heart’s neglectful host?

Is it his lustful, sparkling eye

that will shatter your present bleak?

Or is it worth my soul to save

all my kisses for your cheek?

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What can man do in love,

but seek celestial guidance

from woman’s maker up above?

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What must I do to prove

that I’d give you all my pennies,

live to wipe dust from all your shoes?

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

What silence is this!

-

Mona, Mona, Mona.

Unlock your soul. That’s my wish.

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About the Creator

Emma Kate Gee

Thrift queen and photography peasant seeking creativity and community. Lover of dogs, antique stores, and homemade bread. Writing hard and clear about what hurts.

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  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    I loved this bc it reminded me of an Irish folklore song called “step it up Mary” 😊😊😊

  • I gotta agree with Gerard! It had a melodic flow to it! Brilliant job!

  • Gerard DiLeo2 years ago

    So musical. It sang to me.

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