i the king of sweet fuck all
my kingdom
a car park full of broken tents
a simple windblown news page
sticking to the fence
and here's me thinking
i knew what i meant
and here’s me thinking
i knew where this went
when what i was trying to say
as i ad-libbed free balling script less
as i played out today
i didn't forget
i just misplaced the line
i needed to remember
i didn't forget
i just misplaced the rhyme
i needed in December
in an alley that became a street
old cold blue stone
sits still
beneath asphalt and feet
not sure what it means
a fey tinge of the unreal
but no one remembers
when this was all fields
i didn't remember
i just misplaced the time
i needed to forget
i didn't remember
i just misplaced the line
that wasn’t mine yet
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler



Comments (3)
Fantastic. Your rhythm has a movement to it that flows effortlessly, while you paint a vivid picture.
This is too good mate
Well-wrought! You evoked a city wasteland landscape with which I am all too familiar, living here on the East Side of Indy. I've scene fields turn into strip malls and strip malls turn into ghost towns!