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Minutia

stuck in a mind

By Shirley BelkPublished about 12 hours ago 1 min read
from Nail Art AI in pinterest.com

The granite like tiles made no sense for a hospital floor

Why would gold sparkling specks against cloud-white belong?

The phone in the waiting room would ring ever so often

Giving reassurance and the latest updates to prevent undue worry

Coffee was free along with a soda machine that took plastic cash

Faux leather chairs and sofas spread across the room for resting

And then there was an elevator where two men in scrubs got out

To make their way over. "It doesn't look good," one said

"No! Try your best. Go back and fight. Make it happen!"

Prayers, tears, agony, pleading, phone calls, and hope

But once again, the elevator opened. Time of death 12:23am.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Shirley Belk

Mother, Nana, Sister, Cousin, & Aunt who recently retired. RN (Nursing Instructor) who loves to write stories to heal herself and reflect on all the silver linings she has been blessed with :)

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  • Tim Carmichaelabout 3 hours ago

    This poem was sad incredibly moving. You have a real knack for using physical textures like the gold sparkling specks and faux leather to ground the reader in a setting that feels both sterile and surreal.

  • Rachel Deemingabout 9 hours ago

    Oh no. That's a glimpse into a world of sadness. The waiting, the delivery of the message and that last statement hits hard, Shirley.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 10 hours ago

    This was so sad and emotional. Sending you lots of love and hugs 🥺❤️

  • Andrea Corwin about 11 hours ago

    Oh no. That would be hard but I imagine at some point the docs get used to it? Giving the news? I’m sure you wrote this from experience- I’m sorry.

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