Mine: To Have and to Hold
"If it's destroying you, then it isn't love, my dear." ~ Unknown
By Caroline JanePublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Treddy Chen on Unsplash
I saw you standing,
a proud tower of Eden.
I had to have you.
With splinters of ice,
that I laid in clement times,
I got into you.
Exploiting weakness
and eroding your softness.
I made you brittle.
Now, you fall apart
into my ocean abyss.
Piece by piece, you're mine.
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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Comments (3)
Sending hugs for this amazing poem, as always wonderful words Caroline
Oh wow, you did an amazing job making me feel! Those last few lines held so much emotion. Excellent.
This is gorgeous. Very well done.