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Miles Away

Miles Away is a song, I wrote about myself missing and moving away from home and then looking for a time, in just such a great moment in time when I can instantly be there again! When I would see my dad again. Really longing to see him and this song really captures it for me. I can't help but create this, hope you like it!

By Jamilyah HarePublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Miles Away
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Miles Away

Verse 1- I'm writing on this song, gathering all me thoughts, hoping all is well, lookin in, I feel like I am in the distance, once us laughing and

Really

Reminiscing, painting pictures, sending pictures,

Hope and wishing, really missing...

You

You are the thoughts in mind

I have concluded I must

(I must Really see you in person)

So I gotta reach you now

Before more time escapes us now

Chorus-

Even though I'm miles away

I'm still coming to see you

I promise I won't delay

My groaning heart will reach you. Omit- (My heart will reach you)

I promise You, you can rely on me

Your blessed eyes I see though

From now on, today,

I promise I won't leave you

Time is 10pm now, I have just touched down

Time waits for no one

So I have just landed and jetted and cant wait to reach you

I know you miss me too

Cause I sit and think of the old times the old school days, the 80's and our family reunions and friends

I'm love how we use too's

The sour notes we hit two's

I cant wait cause

I have to reach you some

How- ( high note) whistle octave

Background vocals ( no matter what it takes)

Chorus

Even though I'm miles away

I'm still coming to see you

I promise I won't delay

My groaning heart will reach you. Omit- (My heart will reach you)

I promise You, you can rely on me

Your blessed eyes I see though

From now on, today,

I promise I won't leave you

performance poetry

About the Creator

Jamilyah Hare

Music isn't hidden, to even deaf or blind, to all Music Unites!

What is Music? To me music is an art, that is unattainable, totally achievable but comes and breaks through insightful norms and presents new styles to whom hands it lands in!

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