There is content that can be heavy for some viewers.
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Anxiety, Anxious, and Angst gather within my head, manifesting a
Beacon for my body’s betrayal; my heart bangs on the
Chest and the white cage, believing it’s a crowded
Dungeon, not its protector.
Every sense is jeopardized: I’m
Feeling spiders crawling up on me, hearing many loud voices telling me to
Get rid of my morals and grit– my life and
Humanity?! Not leaving those behind!
I see the obscured faceless men observing my body
Jolts like I’m Frankenstein’s monster while I’m forced to see a red room of
Kinsmen slaughter- get me out of here! I wish
Love and
Magical spells immediately cure this disarray. Ha! This is
Not a romance tale with an
Overdose of cliche that removes mental ailments with a kiss. I only can
Pace back and forth, fighting the
Queasiness and acid
Reaching and clawing up my throat,
Spitting at me
That they are here to stay.
Undo the spell of Unease’s
Vanity! I want to head back to
Where my house was my asylum instead of being
Xenomorphic. Now, I dissociate myself into
You as me in a feign healthier life, always kicking my
Zen onto the trail of the forgotten.
About the Creator
Ace Melee
-Mainly a horror and fantasy writer.
-I post stories, poetry, and scripts on Vocal. My preferred audience is older teens and adults, but I can adjust for younger teens.
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Comments (4)
Wow! This is so beautiful - your use of language is immaculate. Gorgeously done. 💗
Wow, very gripping poem. Wonderful imagery here!
Triggering, but not to worry. It tells me that you connected with me in this poem on a personal level.
Really entrapping imagery here, great use of diction!