Air****so strange****a slap****
Screaming****
Bright****lights
Smell****Mother
Taste****Milk!
About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
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Comments (4)
Wow show the emotions of being born and the scariness of change (if you think about in a deeper way) . Lovely poem.
Being born into the unknown. terrifying...but mother, hopefully, buffets the uncertainty.
you really have to admire butterflies how they come from a cocoon then become adults. Great entry
That made me think of breast milk, lol. Loved your poem!