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Metallic Tears

Forging my own path

By K.B. Silver Published 6 months ago 1 min read
Metallic Tears
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I used to fly

Used to soar

Like Mercury with liquid wings

On my heels, carrying me

Up into the sky

꒰ঌ ໒꒱

Now I lay

On the ground and cry

Silvery tears

My wings

Leaking out but never drying

꒰ঌ ໒꒱

I dipped my quill into

The bubbling shine

Traced into the air a line

Filled with elation

I stepped upon the

Reflective segment but

Hesitation left me

Grounded once more

➽─────────❥

Now, cold metal tears

Spill every night

Refilling my bottomless well

Reforming into the amorphous miracle

The fluid material constructing

Each curve and splattered line

Letting me run on thin cold air

🫙ᝰ🪶

I do not fear running out

Neither do I sweat or shout

The solitary high life

My penance and my

Retreat amongst the clouds

All I ever wanted

I am never coming down

K.B. Silver

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About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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