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Metalhead

Written for Vocal's Moment of Silence Acrostic Challenge

By Addison AlderPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Image by MidJourney

Suddenly the sound was missing.

I cupped my ears, panic-stricken,

Lost onstage, my band still playing.

End of malleus and membrane.

Now, after many months of pain,

Came science to let me hear again:

Electrodes drilled into my brain.

sad poetry

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Addison Alder

Writer of Wrongs. Discontent Creator. Editor of The Gristle.

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  • Himanabout a year ago

    Loved it Addison! You convinced me to make a profile of my own here. Thank you! Himan from ShutUp&Write

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What a unique take! Great acrostic!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Very impactful. I love your Acrostic!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Ooooh...this is very clever. Such a real problem with that particular genre of music and actual loud music in general. You make the intensity and fear of that situation feel real and palpable. Well done, Addison.

  • Oh my, that was so scaryyyy! Loved your Acrostic!

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