
Message in a Bottle
Cast adrift from a child on shore
who’s seen too much and can’t ignore,
nets that tangle, oil that spreads,
bellies bloated, coral beds dead.
She wrote it quick, this salty cry
in a bottle tossed where seabirds fly:
“Please,” it reads, “don’t poison more
the silver life we once adored
Not every treasure’s gold or gem
some have gills and tails, not them
who scorch the reefs and choke the tide,
but those who watch, and those who hide
Save our fish, the blue, the bold
don’t trade them in for plastic gold
If this is found, then hear me true,
what’s left of them depends on you.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️


Comments (7)
Fabulous
Best.. well written 🙏
Lovely, Marie. Such a deep sentiment, well expressed.
This is beautifully written and deeply moving. The child’s voice makes the message hit even harder. ‘Not every treasure’s gold or gem’ — that line really stayed with me. Powerful reminder.
This poem really hits home. It makes you think about how much damage we're doing to the oceans. I've seen firsthand how oil spills can mess things up. And those nets tangling up marine life? That's a huge problem. It's up to us to make a change. How can we spread the word and get more people to care about protecting our oceans?
Fantastic writing; so inspiring Marie! 🌸
We live in a coastal state and it is a big issue here as well. Saving the fish and the sea life. Beautiful poem Marie. Well Done!!!