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Memory You Don't Recall

How I Remember It, You Wiped It

By Andrea Corwin Published 5 months ago 1 min read
Image by Mehrshad Rezaei from Pixabay

An enormous belly and swollen ankles

Happy times, no - more like shambles

of a young love, a teenage marriage

You acted like it was a miscarriage,

a confinement, not what you expected,

timing was off but you well knew!

~

I paid dearly for your mood stew

You shoved me outside, shoeless

Out of the blue it was, me clueless

Enormous belly, no chair for me to sit

My folks arrived 'cause you wanted to quit

~

Months passed, time intervened

baby not yet weaned

Out of the blue you began a fight

ended poorly for you that night

Locks changed, but knocks came at dawn

Not on your life, that was the end

Nothing you say makes me bend

Go on, be free, and I will be me

Save your breath, there is no plea

You crossed the line, no coming back

You’re already fading to black

Copyright © 8/20/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin

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  • Komal5 months ago

    Oof raw and unapologetic! Some memories get erased by others, but you’ve got the power to archive the truth for yourself. Your record doesn’t need their consent. 💖

  • Calvin London5 months ago

    What a raw confession Andrea. Your feelings come through clearly. Well done.

  • Mark Graham5 months ago

    What a sad and seems like a victorious poem for women. Good job.

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    Very personal. As you said in your VSS post, it's cryptic, but it's also raw with emotion in a way that readers can understand and feel.

  • JBaz5 months ago

    THis has to be personal they way it is written, although I hope I am wrong. I felt the hurt, the pain the confusion.

  • Tim Carmichael5 months ago

    Your poem is so powerful and raw. It carries so much strength and emotion. I admire the honesty and resilience that shine through your words.

  • I could feel your strength through the devestation: raw and real. *When you touch a heart you've done your part.*

  • Lana V Lynx5 months ago

    Like Dharrsheena, I hope this is not based on your personal experience, Andi. So heartbreaking.

  • Omgggg, please tell me this didn't happen to you 😭😭😭😭😭

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