Meek
A poem about how meek you are with the one you are in love with.
These feeling that I'm feeling
are what is making me feel weak.
I feel I can't breathe
and that I can't even stand.
I only want to please you
to make you happy to be my husband.
You are my everything
my sweetheart, my all.
When I said for better or worse
to love, honor and obey
these words were not just words
they were vows I swear to keep.
You're someone I don't see myself
falling out of love with.
I only see my love for you growing stronger everyday.
I don't see myself with any other man.
I only see myself you until my end.
My feelings for you are so strong
with you I feel so weak.
And I guess that's why I am so very meek.
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Danielle Mosley
I've enjoyed writing and reading ever since I was in grade school. I'm looking forward to making a career out of my talent as a writer. If you like any of my articles be sure to share them and leave me a tip. Any type of support is great!
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Awwww, so lovely. This was a wonderful poem