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For Poppy's Prompts No. 13 - Greek Mythology Edition (Narcissus): Entry No. 1

Link to Poppy's Challenge, No. 13:
Look at me.
I see
Myself and
No one else here...
My dear,
Please understand,
I cannot look away
For you
(But will you still stay
And never go?)
The water is clear
For the season...
Another glimmer...
It's true,
You have your reasons,
But you better
Leave me. I hear
No sound, you know,
Except this brook.
And I must look...
It's all I can bear to see.
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Comments (5)
Oh I love this. The title is so perfect for the poem. Excellent job Kendall!
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Oooo, this was an awesome take on the prompt! Loved it!
Ah wow, this is a challenge entry? I'm pretty sure you're going to win with this one x
excellent entry, kendall!