Mayday/1st of Fools 2
a birthday present for my wife!

Recalls a long and memorable walk we took together one spring day during hard times a couple years ago, and how we were refreshed by the spectacle of nature and humanity. Joyeux anniversaire mon amour!
It is always a change--: SPRING SNAKE!!!
[Theme of Green]
Epidemic of May Time CAT Lady,
seen on the balcony
plants
ground level for ground-dweller (she has more kitties there for sure than her lease allows)
in green thematics: a sun-bleached potted-plant scene places this heavyset lady still youngish mother of some fur-babies,
portrait overflowing with flesh,
the sun through the glass eulogizing her enormous breasts
which hang over the fresh crisp leaves of the potted plants inter-tangled.
The mewlers and mewlings:
cats meow at the balcony which is essentially the
diaphanously
Cut Portrait of Her Ghost Behind Glass, the bulk of her and the motherly green thumbs trimmed with the fat of her generous bearing.
BENEVOLENT TEATED KITCHEN
(o mother!) so many cats crowding as if
around the idol of great teated diva hostess DEVI/
surrounded by felines lazing behind the sun with them/
the watering can spreads further joys among the potted plants//:
but it moves,
[the green motive] and
was driving this narrative;
emotive a more-motor so
hey wait, slow down, look at that
all the old neighborhoods and reminders of all the same
nevermind...
The mind is a many-motored emotion/
and oh yeah with the burden of desire's pulsation,
more more more.
but GREEN was the THEME on our mayday walk, as it should be, budding florz under the overcast;
the underlays, the strident little slips
of green shoot and all the pixie
pikes of them.
It waxed easygoing on the onset trip,
a GreenDay for spring snake!
About the Creator
Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462
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