Marble
a new carving on the way
Photo by Vlad Kutepov on Unsplash
Exactly how long does it take to
unravel our intertwined souls
and chisel myself out of
us without breaking my
favorite pieces we
formed together
and become
me once
more
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (15)
I can totally relate... but not so eloquently. ⚡❤️⚡
You've carved something masterful here. Congratulations on Top Story!
Absolutely loved this nonet poem. Well done and congratulations on the Top Story.
Beautiful!💞
Congratulations on your Top Story!
It is well done, congrats.
What a marvelous metaphor- beautifully evoked sense of loss! Congrats on the well-earned Top Story! :)
Just perfect
Love this. Visual, compelling, and heartfelt
This is beautiful. Congrats on the TS.
Brilliant work
Great piece!
This is a fabulous, beautiful nonet for the challenge! Congrats on TS.🎉⭐️
So so beautiful!
Beautiful formatting!