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Man Falling

A man is unsure of what is happening to him.

By J. Kendall BatesPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

I thought

I was at sea

By night

Floating somewhere

Off the shore.

I was sure

Some shadowed flag

With waves of red and black

Wove beneath the water.

I thought

I was by a rollercoaster

Solving the end of the puddle man

Resting beneath its mighty feet.

I was sure

I had seen the burnt

Corners near the massive loop,

The Tenth Circle of Hell.

I thought

I had fallen through the sky

From the boat from an arrow

The struck my shoulder and pushed my soul

To the murky waters.

I was sure

The dead man was me.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

J. Kendall Bates

I am a big geek and nerd, if those are two classifications that you prefer to keep separated. I love science fiction, fantasy, dabble in horror, and enjoy anything that blurs or crosses lines. I try to replicate this in my writing.

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