
u make me smile
u make me cry
i love you madly
i don’t know why
u make me dizzy
u make me spin
u keep me holy
u make me sin
u make me love you
i hate your guts
u drive my passions
u drive me nuts
u send me crazy
u keep me sane
u get me high
and down again
u make me hunger
u keep me fed
u make me lead
while being led
u make me happy
u get me blue
once we were one
u made us two
u make my days
u bring the sun
an endless summer
u make us one
u make me happy
u make it real
u keep me grounded
u make it real
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (1)
Agonising ambiguous anti-comfort or euphoric explicit ecstasy?