Make A Wish
Then, Follow Suit
By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Chris Henry on Unsplash
Too hot to be still
She explodes across the sky
And we whisper, awe
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Comments (8)
i love your poems
Hope you made a wish on the falling star. There are many stories to tell about such a happening. Good work.
I love the metaphor created in this simply by assigning the meteor gender. The energy in your Haiku is electric, Kelli. Punches well above its word count!
I am enjoying your poetry this morning! Thank you!💗💗💗
Wow, this poem really paints a vivid picture of a powerful moment. The way it describes an explosion in the sky is both beautiful and intense, and the sense of shared awe is so touching. It's a great reminder of how amazing nature can be and how it makes us feel. Lovely expression!
Meteor showering momentum! Excellent!
Energy, like the fab Ms Moore said and sensuality. For some reason. Well done on this.
There's so much energy in this!