undid the buttons of my jeans
tore my shirt off
pulled you closer to me.
can you please
love me?
how childish of me to think
that this animalistic act of pleasure
means you will heal my scars
while drawing new ones
all over my body.
nails on my back
lips on my neck
spit in my mouth
can you make all my demons
die, please?
can you fill my body with your warmth
shock my dead heart into feeling
whisper words into my ear
and hold me when we’re all done.
i fall in love with making love
and then I remember it is all but
an instinct.
About the Creator
Sara
Don’t look for love.
Be love.
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Very deep and intense with a pervading tinge of melancholy!