Love in Four
A love poem to Love
How to talk of Love?
This is hard.
I don't know if I can do it.
You see, I want to go big,
Take Love to the max
With the odd long word or two
From my tool box
To make a poem that will last.
But each line will be huge and deep
And wide and too much for this task.
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Big with each word: that is how I like to do it!
To show how love is so fine.
It has a lack of fear:
Seen in the bold way it eyes you
On Day One
With an open bare look:
"Come here!" it says
And you skip to it, warm and easy
With hope that it will keep you,
Safe.
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And the best Love, the love
That goes on and on -
Can you sum it up in four?
The days of love that show in
Your skin and the skin of the one you love
As it will ruck and line and grey
Over time;
But in the face of this face
Love will hold you and them as one.
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But it is not easy
To get this over
When you have a tiny pool
To grab a word from;
I feel held back and
Tied and this is not what love is.
Love does not know a wall;
Love does not know a trap
Love can ride high and free
Like a bird on the wing,
And soar into the air,
High
To fly
To the moon and back.
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I ask:
Why put a lead on love?
Don't jerk it like a dog
Kept in the yard!
Let it bark and howl!
And bite! But only to put a soft mark
On a neck or a foot,
For a show of lust for all to see;
The kick that goes with Love
On the side.
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I look back.
Word upon word,
Line upon line
On the page.
And I can see Love! In a poem!
My love of Love and my love of each word
Used to make a Love poem.
It has been hard - four, it's so few.
But it is a love poem to Love.
Love, once more, has won.
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Comments (3)
This was brilliant such a great take on this challenge
The love that goes on and on! That line really made me smile. Your poem was brilliant! I loved it!
I loved this. Such a clever take on the prompt. Well done.