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Love in an Elevator

Be young, be foolish, but not that foolish

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Love in an Elevator

Hands pressed tight against the wall,

breathless whispers, bodies fall.

Numbers climb, the lights glow red,

heat between us, words unsaid.

Fingers trace, a reckless thrill,

caught between the want and will.

A silver chime, the doors resist,

lips collided in fevered bliss.

One more floor, one more sigh,

hands that tease, mouths that lie.

The world can wait, just one more taste,

before we rise, undone, erased.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    I believe a scene like this is portrayed in many romantic or romcom type movies. Good job.

  • Anthony Dunn 12 months ago

    Good 👌

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