When love drives you mad,.
You end up doing inexplicable things.
You feel overwhelmed.
You live in your own world.
Thinking about your new partner.
Spending time together.
doing things together.
You're thinking about each other.
When love takes control
You do not see clearly.
You are easily deceived.
Love becomes your remote.
You transform into a robot.
You are unconsciously governed.
Your feelings have been taken away.
Your thoughts, too.
Your heart resides somewhere.
You gave it to your spouse.
The partner
that could crush your heart at any time.
The partner
who keeps making you elongated promises.
Tears of joy will transform into tears of despair.
You will awaken from the stupidity of love.
That is when you will know that love has driven you insane.
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Gloria Penelope
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So touching!
Omgggg, this is the ultimate freaking truth! Gosh I never wanna go down that road again. Loved your poem!