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Lost Echoes

moving on with nothing

By Forest GreenPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Lost Echoes
Photo by Tim Mossholder on Unsplash

I see some cracks in the rock and I don't like it

Then again the rock has been cracking for a while now

It is too late to fix it as you have left me in this state

Things fell apart and I still don't understand how

We were committed until I felt like we were no more

I want to put our past together in the back of my mind

Until it is completely gone in the dead air

If you want to forget about it too that would be fine

It is a lost echo that is been out of tune

You'll probably meet someone else real soon

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About the Creator

Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.

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  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    This sounds like a 'Dear Jane' letter. A way of saying goodbye without saying goodbye. Good job.

  • L.I.E8 months ago

    Aww so sad 😢💔

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