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Losing your voice

On the line

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Digital illustration: generative AI, Photos, Paint. RGT, 2025

Losing you was desperate

That day you stepped through

The departure gate

Forty years ago

One last view

Like a coffin dropping

Into the hollow dais

Or rolling along

Hidden by the curtains

Beyond sight of the mourners

In the crematorium chapel

Final farewell from this man

Never to see your smile again

Your hair of jet

Such eyes set deep with hope

For a future we would not share

Though we dared stay in touch

Just for a while

By transatlantic trunk call

Microseconds delay on the line

Seemed like hours

As I waited for your words

To return to me across the ocean

Worse still the pain

Of letters few and

Far between

Weeks await a reply

Never knowing which letter would be

The last

I don't recall which one it was

But I dreamt so many times

Of seeing you again

On the bus or around town

We'd say hi

I'd ask how's a girl

You wouldn't reply

Only then did I realise

It wasn't you

I was talking to

Just a letter with your voice

Imagined

Or the telephone call

When your words came

Delayed by

Mere microseconds

Or was it

Forever

sad poetry

About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Mark Graham5 months ago

    What a way of saying to goodbye to someone special.

  • This was so heartbreaking. Not easy at all to be in this situation. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • John Cox5 months ago

    This is stunning elegy, Ray, filled grace and hope to the bitter end! I’m sorry for the loss that inspired this beautiful poem!

  • Lana V Lynx5 months ago

    That certainly kept me guessing to the end until I saw “sad poetry” tag. Sorry for your loss, Raymond, literal or just to a long distance.

  • I love the sad ambiguity in these words

  • Shirley Belk5 months ago

    Man, that tugged at my heart!

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