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Litany of the Cooling Hearth

A soft farewell to heat—and the small, steadfast hope it leaves behind.

By Milan MilicPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

The fire learns our names in vowels of heat,

then forgets them, syllable by syllable,

as if unspelling a blessing.

༺ _ ༻

Kindling was a bright impatience.

Logs were our bravado.

We fed the mouth that praised us

until it yawned, satisfied,

and began to close.

༺ _ ༻

Now the flames are lowercase —

Brief edits of orange

in the margins of a night that has already begun.

Ash gathers like snowfall with no weather,

soft and declarative.

༺ _ ༻

We speak in futures that missed their trains:

we would, we might, we could—

each phrase a spark drifting up and out,

cooling before it finds a star.

༺ _ ༻

Listen: the coals keep a red grammar,

punctuation marks of heat—

ellipses where we hoped for an exclamation.

Endings love their commas.

They ask us to pause, not vanish.

༺ _ ༻

When the last ember blinks,

It does not argue.

It simply hands back what it borrowed:

light to the dark,

smoke to the rafters,

warmth to our open, unarmed palms.

༺ _ ༻

We don’t clap.

We don’t pray.

We breathe the thin perfume of cinders

and practice a gentler grip.

༺ _ ༻

Some lessons arrive as a blaze;

this one walks out barefoot—

leaving the door ajar,

the room cooler,

the air clear enough to hear

the first quiet footstep of morning.

ElegyFree Verseheartbreakinspirationalsad poetryStream of Consciousnessnature poetry

About the Creator

Milan Milic

Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.

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  • Natalie Wilkinsonabout a month ago

    These entries to the challenge are wonderfully written.

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