Limerick confused as a haiku
Haiku confused as a child as a son as a soldier (for children being assaulted in Gaza)
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 9 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Amber Kipp on Unsplash
The soldiers masked as
Men, took me to a strange pen
I was once a son.
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Can you make destruction look like something that shines?
I’m afraid to make you laugh because the bombs go off at random times
I’m a son, not a soldier
I feel like my heart will smolder
I write a haiku to give to mother, she said it sounded like a limerick and this was way too long and didn’t rhyme.
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There once was a soldier
Whose soul they did sold there
To a rainy, misty motherly face
A caught trout flailing in a fiery mace
And dropped the act, falling into despair
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Once, there was a shoe
On two feet they did bounce, flew
Now it’s a burnt glue.



Comments (5)
Creative work of this sad subject Melissa. Hope you are keeping well.
Prayers for all those continuing to suffer violence.
This was so sad Merly. Loved your poem!
Well-wrought, Melissa. The bitter hypocrisy that some of the ancestors of those who fled the Holocaust would perpetrate such madness...
Sad but vivid and very well written for me. I hope many more read it.