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Limerick confused as a haiku

Haiku confused as a child as a son as a soldier (for children being assaulted in Gaza)

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
Limerick confused as a haiku
Photo by Amber Kipp on Unsplash

The soldiers masked as

Men, took me to a strange pen

I was once a son.

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Can you make destruction look like something that shines?

I’m afraid to make you laugh because the bombs go off at random times

I’m a son, not a soldier

I feel like my heart will smolder

I write a haiku to give to mother, she said it sounded like a limerick and this was way too long and didn’t rhyme.

There once was a soldier

Whose soul they did sold there

To a rainy, misty motherly face

A caught trout flailing in a fiery mace

And dropped the act, falling into despair

_

Once, there was a shoe

On two feet they did bounce, flew

Now it’s a burnt glue.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Grz Colm9 months ago

    Creative work of this sad subject Melissa. Hope you are keeping well.

  • Prayers for all those continuing to suffer violence.

  • This was so sad Merly. Loved your poem!

  • C. Rommial Butler9 months ago

    Well-wrought, Melissa. The bitter hypocrisy that some of the ancestors of those who fled the Holocaust would perpetrate such madness...

  • Sad but vivid and very well written for me. I hope many more read it.

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