Lilith
the fault in her stars....
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In the midst of a downpour,
she savors hollows
Her feet caresses marmoris
her gaze follows.
She stands alone, her mind
on wars
Her neurons screams to the moons
What was the fault in her stars?
The fault in her stars
She paints them red and blue,
Abyssal sapphires they born from her scars
She bleeds herself on their hue.
The hue makes their way
Through her veins and pulse
She tilts her head, the saudade that lay
In her heart, daggers hard.
Soothes her, the daggers. She smiles.
Feeling a cafuné familiar-
Her neurons giggle at the whisper,
“Sabaism- the worship of the Stars”
(A/N: Thank You for giving this poem a read. Please let me know if the words I have woven had ensnared your heartbeats or not. Thank you<3)
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Comments (12)
Awesome poem! Neurons giggling made my neurons crackle! I subscribe to you. My name is Bill. Pleased to meet you. ⚡💙⚡
The juxtaposition of pain and peace, especially in the line about the daggers soothing her, is striking! Great work ✨ Also, i love the picture you used, I never know what picture to use lol
You knocked it out of the park. This is such a powerful, evocative poem. Loved it! Congrats on the Top Story!
Congrats on the top story🎉 lyrical with many Portuguese words that I had to discover through your poetry.
Your poem is both mesmerizing and haunting in its lyrical beauty. Well done. Congratulations, too, on the Top Story achievement.
This poem is truly exceptional! It captures emotions beautifully and resonates deeply.
Lovely poem
This is absolutely incredible.
This is so beautiful, yet so sad - those daggers.
This feels like a sign, but for I don't know what yet. I love Lilith.
Wow, love your world choice ♥︎
This was so gorgeously written! Your word choice is amazing!