
i thought of you a minute ago
and how it's been so long
i like to think you're doing well
kicking goals and staying strong
it was a cold Canberra winter
It snowed in eighty two
they turned your gas off
cause you didn't pay the bill
i had to boil your jug
just to do the dishes
while the day time tv
slowly crushed my soul
i was waiting for you
while you waited
for something else
waiting for you
while you waited
a world and a half
away from me
i was waiting for you
while you waited
another life away
i was waiting for you
while you waited
for me not to be waiting
you said to me remember;
"Whatever ever it is you think you see
how ever you think you feel
and what you might think you want
what you think you really need
- it's not me
you're my mate
...
that's it!"
She hugged me tight and hard
i knew she was right
but i was a selfish prick
we drifted
and assumed
our separate lives
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Poignant and profound. Great work!