LIKE A FAST MOVING TRAIN
No station in sight
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I’m sitting here contemplating;
Thoughts whiz by but I’m still waiting
For just one thought to cause a spark,
With pen in hand to leave its mark.
I look around to see what’s here;
Something, anything: laughter, fear.
The perfect thing that I might find
To activate my idle mind.
About the Creator
Margaret Brennan
I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.
My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.
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Comments (6)
Great poem Margaret! So relatable. Nice metaphor.😊💕❤️
Well-wrought! Slick and very clever!
This is so relatable for all Indians😅.
Great use of rhyme, imagery, and formatting! This was very relatable!
Lovely!
Well written.