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Lightning Lantern

Just some bugs in a jar

By K.B. Silver Published 4 months ago 1 min read
Lightning Lantern
Photo by Slava Keyzman on Unsplash

On my way out to the yard

I grab the handled lantern jar

The gleeful squeals of

Fading summer linger on the threshold

The scent of cut grass

Wafting on the breathy breeze

Carrying stars in

Swirling drafts glowing

Like a stream of dreams

I wander through

Blinking constellations

Capture the miracle of

Natural green light behind

Curved walls of glass

Smiles diving and swerving

Like kingfishers in tall reeds

Clay streaked hands slip luminant quarry

Beneath the tin lid before

Bare feet run all new paths in the greenery

Green streaked knees and

Popsicle sweetened lips

Pump and giggle in the

Darkening past

A lightning lantern, my only light

I grasp at sheaves of blackening grass

The night gives way to dawn

When I awake

All is gone

But an old lantern

Filled with fairly lights

Hung from the rafters

K.B. Silver

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About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Caitlin Charlton4 months ago

    The beat and rhythm in this was heart stopping, good. You led with energies. Vibrations and heaps of sentimental imagery. Summer being gleeful though? I would've never thought of that. Clever and wild. Playful. 'breathy breeze' 👌🏾 Curved walls of glass. Oh I can see it clearly now. 'Luminant quarry' why do these words fit so well together. I am impressed you carried on a feeling of being in the zone, even to here. 'Sheaves of blackening grass' You're very good at keeping your attention sharp when out on around. Especially where the light lands. Expertly done K.B 🤗❤️

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