You left me...
But I don't care anymore
I deserve better, more
You just slammed the door
In front of me
I feel worthless and alone.
Overthinking...
My only company is
My phone
Trying to heal with
Watching dumb reels
What a stupid idea
Getting married?
I need more time...
To understand what you did
Fuck your feelings
I have to move on
I don't need anything to lean on
Moments we lived for
Tousands of
Memories
We can't forget
It is the end
Don't pertend
Being only a friend
That's all I get
We just met...
After all...
I wanted to take part on the Inverse Challenge, but I think I won't be able to upgrade my account in time, so I guess I'll just leave this poem here for you, guys... By the way thank you so much for 75 subscribers and 500 reads!๐ฅน This sounds crazy for me in less than two months!! Also, many thanks to the Vocal community for my very first poem, that got Top Story last week. (You can read it HERE)
Thank you everyone for the support I got so far, please keep me motivated!!๐ซถ
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Wow! Great read both ways. Well done! ๐
What a shame you can't enter this!
Getting married is hands down the stupidest thing ever, lol. Congratulations on hitting 75 subscribers and 500 reads! ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐๐
Very relatable in this thing we call life! Great job. โค๏ธ๐
Well done, Anna! Great Inverse reflecting raw emotion.