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Life on the Rim

some sort of balance

By Gabriela Trofin-TatárPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
Life on the Rim
Photo by Emmanuel Appiah on Unsplash

The glass is my life, and it balances like it has a right

A life balanced like there's no tomorrow,

Slowly spilling secrets, eyebrows furrowed,

The rim of the glass cannot hold all the stories of my past.

I feel my fingers tremble. They ask: Am I old or new?

My white hairs are falling, should I still dye them too?

Feeling like I cannot breathe freely,

Tipping wildly on my toes, as my world is tilting,

and dangerously so.

Will the glass spill?

This is now the moment before I pour it all out or hold it in.

There's no turning back,

All my life pouring as I witness its tilt,

waiting for my command, a decision I still withstand.

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About the Creator

Gabriela Trofin-Tatár

Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 4 months ago

    A great analogy for where you are and what might (or might not) happen

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