Life is like a lie
On impermanence
Sometimes we frown and sometimes we smile
But either way’s as good as a lie
We feel very real, every once in a while
But: we have yet begun to die
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From the day of birth
Whether we’re rich or we’re poor
We march on with equal worth
For the king and the whore
And those who feel grief and those feel mirth
Each breath’s a step toward’s death’s door
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So if we seem alive and kickin’
Remember we’re temporary
For all we know we could sicken
And pass away before next January
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None of us are permanent
We’re on borrowed time, it’s true
We’ll beg another day and plead with the firmament
But when our grace period’s up, Death will collect his due
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For we are merely water and flesh and calcium phosphate
A network of bone and soft tissue
We may get wound up and we may celebrate
We may shed tears over the hard issues
But these are just the ways we animate
A life-mask we will one day eschew
Then our matter will return to a free state, with a clean slate
And for some that’s a tough truth to chew
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But life’s mask looks like movement and dance
So you might as well seize some joy before you’re through
Yesterday’s gone but tomorrows a chance
To start it up, fresh and new
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The music I had stuck in my head while writing:
About the Creator
Sam Spinelli
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Comments (3)
You begin with a line that cuts through the smile and the strange grimace and says: this is me. Then you unfold the feeling of “where I truly am,” yet you continue to live. And yes, whichever path someone takes—apart from light—it is the same, whether of a king or of the most elaborate courtesan. And when the time of pain arrives, we lose our bravery and look only to the sky—temporarily, though, because in the end it will swallow us, no matter how much we murmur. A beautiful message toward the end, pointing to substance rather than a superficial passage through life.
Fantastic, I loved the unique rhymes and the resigned but flippant tone. The fifth stanza is par excellance. A great read all the way through.
So very well wrought, Sam. Loved this. Elegant and unfiltered, but not harsh. Great challenge entry. Reminds me of something I wrote before...but can't remember the name haha.