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leaving the wake

fresh starts

By Poppy Published 8 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Tattoo This Line Challenge
Image Created on Midjourney

Don’t ever say I didn’t grieve you

For fifteen months I was wearing black

Digging perpetual graves

Writing endless eulogies

Watching petals wither

But you are not the only one I lost

And it was time I got back to myself

So I have finally left the wake

I no longer weep with the sky

Now I dance with the sunlight

The soil is soft again

It is time to plant fresh starts

inspirational

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  • Simon George6 months ago

    I am a bit late to this one, but I really enjoyed it and can see why you'd get an honourable mention in the contest. Congrats on your work. "Writing endless eulogies" to "I finally left the wake." Great imagery. Nice work. :)

  • Marilyn Glover8 months ago

    "I no longer weep with the sky, now I dance with the sunlight"- beauty in simplicity. It's funny how we lose that vision when mourning. Congratulations, Poppy, on your honorable mention!

  • Great job Poppy! Congratulations on your Honourable Mention 🥳.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Test8 months ago

    OOooo! I hope you entered this for the tattoo challenge, because there are a couple couplets that I'd definitely get inked! My favourite is "I no longer weep with the sky, Now I dance with the sunlight"

  • Sean A.8 months ago

    Now that last line is a tattoo for every broken hearted person out there (especially any broken hearted gardeners out there).

  • So true: “But you are not the only one I lost And it was time I got back to myself So I have finally left the wake”💖

  • We always have to move on but we do have memories

  • ❤️

  • Blessings full of grace for all the dancing that lies before you, my friend.

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