Tumble to the frost
Now gathering underfoot
Like blood in the snow.
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A.N: I've got a couple of these old contest entries sitting around that I figured I might as well publish. So here we are!
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Silver Daux
Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.
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Comments (4)
Sounds like a line a villain would utter to the hero leaving the hero scratching his head. Love it
🌨️I can't start without saying that I love your aesthetic on your page. All the reds bursting through the dark background. 🍁I am happy that you dug this one up and published it. 🌨️Very nice imagery. Tumbling to the frost. ❄️We saw it fall in an unforgiving way, in your first line. Then we could see it underneath our feet. 🍁And the strong vividness of the last line paints a picture that won't leave the mind. 'Blood' gave us the consequence of the fall, but it also adds such a contrast to the colour white of the snow. Outstanding, there was nothing not to love about this one 🤗❤️🖤
You are adept at adding a hint of morbid menace to almost anything you create, Silver!
Oooooh. This fucking rocks. I love that final line. And the title is perfect. Glad you shared it..so evocative, so unique and quite violent and sensual in the imagery. Just. Great. Can you guess I loved it? Lol