Layers of Ireland 🇮🇪
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Vibrant layers of Ireland look at me,
heart quickens, as I feel closer to my ancestry.
What a fantastical sight,
as a multi-level-dessert, like creamy chocolate delight.
Textures, hues of greens and blues,
to live there, what a place to choose!
Deep voice of viola lifts the tree’s ears,
and the hill’s rolling, shifting gears.
Angelic clouds surround the atmosphere,
eliminating all soul debris and every fear.
As a slice of peaceful Heaven,
I grip the breeze, because I hear it beckon.
Winds whistle, whisper and whip,
on hot apple cider, I sip.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (5)
Wow… this is stunning, in word and vision. Beautiful through and through- Alain ☘️☘️☘️
As a slice of peaceful heaven" 😃🦋 I didn't know if Ireland was this peaceful and captivating... But, now I know one thing; It's yummy for sure. lol Your poem is smoother than butter. Wonderful ✨
You wrote this wonderfully
This is amazing! 🙌✨ Rhyming is beautiful ✨
Gorgeous - grip the wind is quite unique!