Lattice o' Coincidence
all you can eat?
plate
or
shrimp
or plate of shrimp (out)
got me a shrimp cocktail (of)
love me some shrimp crackers (the)
mmmm more fishy soup - shrimp bisque(blue)
Hoges can chuck another shrimp on the barbie (no )
dried a shrimp (explanation)
nothing like a deep fried shrimp (no)
painted red a dyed shrimp (point)
have you even tried shrimp? (lookin)
shrimp on the grill (for)
shrimp on the brain (one)
catching shrimp at the beach (either)
surfing on a shrimp sandwich (it’s)
getting free comp’d shrimp (all)
living with the prompt shrimp (Part)
don’t even waste a stomped shrimp (of)
Cajun thrilled and slightly swamped shrimp (the)
plate (cosmic)
of (unconsciousness)
shrimp
Miller Knew
*** Please Note : the text enclosed in parenthesis are lines from a movie and not my work!
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶4 days ago in Petlife
Comments (3)
What’s the movie? Trying to decipher ! But liked the two poems Brenton.
Your rhythm is impeccable as always. There's always such a strong beat to your work and with this sort of double poem here it's almost stronger. Great poem!
I don't eat shrimp but the mention of sandwich made me hungry hehehehe. Loved your poem!