Lantern In The Woods
My Awakening
Every year, for years, we made the journey
Out to that cabin, nestled in grandpa’s back woods
I can still hear his gravely voice reassuring, “don’t worry “
“Ol lantern here, he”ll make sure things are good”
We’d carry in the bare essentials
And then, hunted for hours to earn our keep
He’ d say, “what happens here is confidential “
And lantern was there to keep everything straight
See, lantern knew the woods, like he was born there
One of the creatures that roamed in the night
Long before grandpa’s great grand-daddy breathed that cold air
Lantern and his kin, seemed to gather the light
I will never forget the day that we lost him
The day that my grandpa found the other side
We were out in the darkest corner when it happened
As clear as a bell, when that old grizzly arrived
The skies became dark and the forest grew silent
Like we were the only ones left in the world
He rose from the brush, bigger than a giant
Raising his paw, like a freight train unfurled
Grandpa raised his hands in an effort to defend us
We hid by a rock and witnessed all hell arrive
The next thing I recall, was lantern, covered in cuts
Confirming the nightmare that grandpa didn’t survive
Some nights I awaken, reliving that moment
Shivering and wet, a small boy in my dreams
Learning the hard truths that there are things we don’t know, and
That nothing is ever the way that it seems
Somedays I return, make my way to that cabin
Dust off the sill and take a moment to breathe
Finding in the air a connection with lantern
Remembering since that day, he’d always be there for me
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (2)
Oh, such a wonderful piece, Kelli. Well done <3
Aww what a memory this was. Grandpa really did sound like the voice you all needed. Hunting for your keep. Sounds like a very rewarding thing you've all done. 'The day that your grandpa found the other side.' this line was deeply sad. I can almost feel, the feeling of his absence. Gosh the bit about the bear. You set the scene so well. I felt like I was there. Wait. Was grandpa the lantern. If so. That's such a clever and deeply sad and chilling merging in meaning. Gosh. This was so good, when the meaning started to linger and all began to materialize... I was in awe. Outstanding work as always Kelli 🤗 ❤️🖤