Land of creation
Field of dreams in Summer heat
Fresh breathing air
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Ocean swirling breeze
Sprays of wetness on my feet
Twisting high waves whirl
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Breeze withers air
Freshening sweet empowers
Outside safe and ripe
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Hot whizzing flames
Bright fuzzy blazing burning
Bonfire spitting heat
About the Creator
Denise Larkin
A writer with a BA in Arts & Humanities (specialism Creative Writing), studying for an MA in Creative Writing, writes poetry and fictional short stories. The author of Time to Run, The Island of Love, Darkness, and The Non-Human.
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