
Gentle light,
The first promise,
Springs a hope,
Life isn’t over,
Ever the ember,
Low has burned,
Quick to start,
Just a spark,
Painted art,
Natural as breath,
We never left,
Life before the kiss of death.
About the Creator
Jamye Sharp
Oregon writer, trying to have some fun and improve my craft.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (3)
Beautiful 🌻🙏🌻
Gorgeous—absolutely loved that last line especially!
This poem-like piece has some beautiful imagery. The idea of a "spark" that can start anew is powerful. It makes me think about how in life, even when things seem low, there's always a chance for a fresh start. What do you think the overall message here is supposed to be?